Davonta Johnson

                                                            Fifth Grade

                                                            Ms. Counts’s Class

Summer

        As the school days end, the bright yellow sun pops out of the sky.  The ice cream man is on his way.  I can almost taste those frozen pops in my mouth.  As I suck on my pop, I get sweaty. 

The flowers have bloomed and the sky is full of fresh air.  I say to myself, “I wish there was a pool that I could jump in right now.”

The sun is beaming on my head.  I think to myself, “It’s hot enough to cook turkey and eggs.”  I sweat so hard and so much that I feel like I’m going to pass out.  Everything that I touch is hot like a skillet on the stove.

As I’m on my way to the park, I see a dog with its mouth open.  I bet it is hotter than me, with all of that fur on its back.  When I get to the park, I get on the swings.  Now I don’t feel like I’m in the desert of dryness anymore…just cool fresh breeze.

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